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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is it clear that the first 'he' refers to Huma and the second 'he' refers to Rennard/traitorous knight. Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after he attempted to kill Oswal.
  

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cboutin3 Is it clear that the first 'he' refers to Huma and the second 'he' refers to Rennard/traitorous knight. Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after he attempted to kill Oswal. If you are right, then it should be expressed in a much clearer way: Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after the latter attempted to kill Oswal .

  • cboutin3 Is it clear that the first 'he' refers to Huma and the second 'he' refers to Rennard/traitorous knight.
  • Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after he attempted to kill Oswal.
  • If you are right, then it should be expressed in a much clearer way: Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after the latter attempted to kill Oswal .
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cboutin3 Is it clear that the first 'he' refers to Huma and the second 'he' refers to Rennard/traitorous knight. Huma discovered that Rennard had orchestrated the death of Grand Master Trake of Baxtrey, and he confronted the traitorous knight after he attempted to kill Oswal.
If you are right, then it should be expressed in a much clearer way: Huma discover

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