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Successor Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Pronominal reference

Hello,

could you please tell me if this sentence make sense to you:

"The success of the approach to land conservation was due to its flexibility. "

I just wonder whether the pronoun ITS refers clearly enough to the word THE APPROACH, or do you find it ambiguous?.

Thank you for your answers.
  

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Hi, could you please tell me if this sentence make sense to you: "The success of the approach to land conservation was due to its flexibility. " I just wonder whether the pronoun ITS refers clearly enough to the word THE APPROACH, or do you find it ambiguous?. Yes, I do find it requires a bit of thought.

  • Hi, could you please tell me if this sentence make sense to you: "The success of the approach to land conservation was due to its flexibility.
  • " I just wonder whether the pronoun ITS refers clearly enough to the word THE APPROACH, or do you find it ambiguous?.
  • Yes, I do find it requires a bit of thought.
  • You should try to reword it.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
could you please tell me if this sentence make sense to you:

"The success of the approach to land conservation was due to its flexibility. "

I just wonder whether the pronoun ITS refers clearly enough to the word THE APPROACH, or do you find it ambiguous?.
Yes, I do find it requires a bit of thought. You should try to reword it.

Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

I suppose the pattern in the sentence above is the same as in this one:

"Alan's shyness was due to his lack of confidence. "

Here the pronoun HIS refers clearly to Alan avoiding thus ambiguity.

How about :

"The success of the approach was due to its flexibility." ???

Thank you for your answer!
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How about: The flexibility of the approach to land convervation was the key to its success.
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FOR ME IT HAS MORE SENSE THIS WAY:

The approach's succes to land conservation was due its flexibility.
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The approach to the land conservation was successful due to its flexibility.

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