1. The Overseas Department has set forth the following three practical points for 2015:<br/><br/>2..To dedicate oneself to the <b>promotion of conducting shakubuku</b> based on consistent Gongyo and Daimoku.<br/><br/>.To dedicate oneself to <b>conducting shakubuku</b> based on consistent Gongyo and Daimoku.<br/><br/>I believe the second sentence is wrong and should be rephrased as above.<br/><br/>Am I correct?<br/><br/>Thanks.