Hi Sand-dumes, I'm sure I'm going to sound quite mean saying this, but people make their living doing the type of work you're asking for here. If you have a slogan already, and you want us to check the grammar, that's one thing (like, don't capitalize "You Love"), but to ask for people in the forums to provide the creative insights that firms specialize in isn't quite fair, to my way of thinking.
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