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Osee Posted 18 years ago
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promising academic future?
Could you help me make the following line reads better? Especially, how about the green parts? Thanks a lot.
Studying in such a unique atmosphere, I sense that I would get/obtian/gain (which is better) a solid training in this field and possess a promising academic future.
Studying in such a unique atmosphere, I sense that I would get/obtian/gain (which is better) a solid training in this field and possess a promising academic future.
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As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits.
- As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'!
- You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia.
- Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits.
- Be simple, clear and direct: Studying in this/your unique atmosphere, I think I would gain solid training and a promising academic future in this field.
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As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits. Be simple, clear and direct:
Studying in this/your unique atmosphere, I think I would gain solid training and a promising academic future in this field.
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Mister Micawber, thank you so much for pointing out this. I will be careful about this. Osee
As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits. Be simple, clear and direct:
Mister Micawber
As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits. Be simple, clear and direct:
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BTW, are you sure it is "gain solid training" without the article "a"? Thanks.
As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits. Be simple, clear and direct:
Study
Mister Micawber
As I said before, Osee, 'too thick'! You are caught up in 'officialese' English, the impenetrable, modifier-dense language of bureaucracy and academia. Break out of it now, before you develop bad writing habits. Be simple, clear and direct:
Study
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are you sure it is "gain solid training" without the article "a"?Yes: no article.
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