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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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prom

As I'm watching the rain, I'm beginning to think about an event which happened in my high school prom date. Also it was raining that day and at night. My date and I was totally drenched. Our car was running out of gas in somewhere in the worst borough. We were walking on this negiborhood and inviting trouble, especially we in tuexdo and gown. We tried to avoid bystanders as much as we could. I was scared a hell of myself when some young punks apprached us. Somehow they began to harass her. Then they tried to swing at me, and I dodged and ran as fast as possible. I felt ashamed of myself after I left her behind.

Are they OK?

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Hi, As I'm watching the rain, I'm beginning to think about an event which happened with my high school prom date. It had been raining all day. My date and I were totally drenched.

— Clive

  • Hi, As I'm watching the rain, I'm beginning to think about an event which happened with my high school prom date.
  • It had been raining all day.
  • My date and I were totally drenched.
  • Our car ran out of gas somewhere in the worst borough.
  • We were walking in this neighborhood and inviting trouble, especially since I was in a tuxedo and she wore a gown.
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Hi,

As I'm watching the rain, I'm beginning to think about an event which happened with my high school prom date. It had been raining all day. My date and I were totally drenched. Our car ran out of gas somewhere in the worst borough. We were walking in this neighborhood and inviting trouble, especially since I was in a tuxedo and she wore a gown. We tried to avoid
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