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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, is this sentence grammatically correct?
Guy Fieri sends four talented chefs running through the grocery aisles in a high-stake grocery store cooking competition. The chefs are hit by real-world challenges such as finding workarounds when essential ingredients suddenly go "out-of-stock" or creating a masterpiece when you can only cook with "5 items or less" or a $10 budget. In the end, the food does the talking and the last chef standing will have the chance to win some serious cash prize!
Guy Fieri sends four talented chefs running through the grocery aisles in a high-stake grocery store cooking competition. The chefs are hit by real-world challenges such as finding workarounds when essential ingredients suddenly go "out-of-stock" or creating a masterpiece when you can only cook with "5 items or less" or a $10 budget. In the end, the food does the talking and the last chef standing will have the chance to win some serious cash prize!
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There are a few errors in the paragraph. "
- There are a few errors in the paragraph.
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There are a few errors in the paragraph. There is a subject shift, changing from the "chefs" to "you." Try to put modifiers as close to the words they modify as possible: "...can cook only with..." You are saying, "...only cook." The final sentence needs a comma before "and," and it should be "win some serious cash" or "win a serious cash prize."
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