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Autominus Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Profile for CV
Dear friends,
I re-write my personal statement (profile) for my CV.
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?
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I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research activities as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. I have hands-on experience in varied technical areas, including network infrastructure design, security, storage, backups, virtualization technology, and administration of Linux and Windows systems. I also have an exceptional leadership, interpersonal and analytical skills.
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I hope this text won't have any grammar mistakes, and the sentences will be read smoothly in the end.
Thank you in advance.
I re-write my personal statement (profile) for my CV.
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?
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I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research activities as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. I have hands-on experience in varied technical areas, including network infrastructure design, security, storage, backups, virtualization technology, and administration of Linux and Windows systems. I also have an exceptional leadership, interpersonal and analytical skills.
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I hope this text won't have any grammar mistakes, and the sentences will be read smoothly in the end.
Thank you in advance.
Top answer
Hello, autominus—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Overall, it is quite good; I have suggested only a couple of small changes: I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects.
- Hello, autominus—and welcome to English Forums.
- Thank you for registering as a member.
- Overall, it is quite good; I have suggested only a couple of small changes: I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects.
- I have hands-on experience in various technical areas, including network infrastructure design, security, storage, backups, virtualization technology, and administration of Linux and Windows systems.
- I also have exceptional leadership, interpersonal and analytical skills.
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Hello, autominus—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Overall, it is quite good; I have suggested only a couple of small changes:
I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. I have hands-on experience in
I am a Computer Network Administrator with a background in computer science and research as well as solid experience in enterprise IT environments, managing people as well as projects. I have hands-on experience in
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