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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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Hi,

Dear Tanaka-san:
I hope this email finds you doing well.

After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed.
From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years.
I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success of future Sukiyaki total business will also benefits TYP.
I wonder, when did TYP total sales ever increased more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Coefficient chart?

Please correct this paragraph. Thank you for sharing.
  

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Dear Tanaka-san , I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Tanaka-san , I hope this email finds you doing well.
  • After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed.
  • From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years.
  • I consider myself as a go-getter type of person .
  • The success of future Sukiyaki total business will also benefits TYP.
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Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success of f
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Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success fu
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Strike-through means delete.

Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter t
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I'm lost...it's too complicated for me..
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You have only tried once, but if it is too complicated for you, then you might as well stop trying to learn English.
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I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The successful future Sukiy
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