Professional project

I'm writing a professional project to apply for a scholarship. Please help me correct mistakes. Thanks in advance.

I intend to choose XXX as the major for my Master degree. The very first and main reason I choose this major is because of the non-stop development of Information Technology in XXX in recent years. Information technology companies all over the world are investing in developing countries, where they can find low-cost labor markets, to outsource their softwares. Therefore, XXX, more specifically XXX city, where I’m studying, has many big foreign IT companies. After graduating, I will have lots of opportunites to have a suitable job according to my skills and qualifications.

Studying XXX, I will be able to take responsibilites of Information Technology systems, especially Web systems, assure that these systems are accessible and coherent. Building and deploying web application is becoming popular in many IT companies. Therefore, I think my major is really necessary right now.

I need the XXX Scholarship for these following three reasons. Firsly, I want to have a chance to acquire new specialized knowledges in XXX where Information Technology is well-developed. Secondly, I want to experience an indepent life in a foreign country and improve my XXX language ability at the same time. Thirdly, estimated master’s cost is quite high with an undergraduate like me. Therefore, I consider XXX scholarship to be a very precious opportunity

I think I have the ablility to study this subject well because I’ve been contacting with computer since I was a child. I have the passion of what we can make from this wonderful machine. Presently, I’m having good studying results and I’m very interested in my major. At my university, I’ve participated in many pracical projects, especially building online websites, which are directly linked to the major I chose. I’ve been following a cooperation program, designed by XXX, in particular to support research and education in XXX. I had opportunities to study many subjects in XXX, taught by XXX professors. Therefore, I’m confident that I have the ability to study subjects in XXX universities.

After graduating, I intend to work as a IT expert for a French company in XXX city. I think this is promising because presently, there are many big XXX IT companies in XXX city such as XXX, XXX, … and the lack of employees who know XXX is a big concern. Therefore, I strongly believe that if I have the chance to study in XXX, I can satisfy their requirements.
With my contribution, I think I can do my small part to help develop my city’s software industry as well as my country’s economy