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After completion of my degree I would like to work for one year for Apple, applying myself to the design and development of software.
After completion of my degree I would like to work for one year for Apple, applying myself to the design and development of software.
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After completion of my degree , I would like to work for one year for Apple, applying my knowledge myself to the design and development of software. It's OK to apply oneself, but it is your education that you will be using.
- After completion of my degree , I would like to work for one year for Apple, applying my knowledge myself to the design and development of software.
- It's OK to apply oneself, but it is your education that you will be using.
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After completion of my degree, I would like to work for one year for Apple, applying my knowledge myself to the design and development of software.
It's OK to apply oneself, but it is your education that you will be using.
It's OK to apply oneself, but it is your education that you will be using.
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