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DANNY TRAN Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Product Introduction Letter
Dear All,
I am helping a friend to write a product introduction letter for his company; however, my writing skill is very plain. Is there any nice and skillful people out there would like to help me? Below is my draft:
Dear Sir,
My name is Steve Onstott. I am a Marketing Director for XXX, LLC located in Orange County, USA.
I found your company’s information at XXX Convention show. I would like to introduce you our unique product “EM”. “EM” is a revolutionary feminine health care product that is 100% herbal, and it is designed to effectively help in restoring the shape and size of the vagina within. It works on the second day!
If you want to know more information about Em, please either visit our website (www), call my mobile number (714), or email me (XXX@com).
Sincerely,
Steve Onstott
P.S. Thank you for reading my email and have a wonderful day!
I am helping a friend to write a product introduction letter for his company; however, my writing skill is very plain. Is there any nice and skillful people out there would like to help me? Below is my draft:
Dear Sir,
My name is Steve Onstott. I am a Marketing Director for XXX, LLC located in Orange County, USA.
I found your company’s information at XXX Convention show. I would like to introduce you our unique product “EM”. “EM” is a revolutionary feminine health care product that is 100% herbal, and it is designed to effectively help in restoring the shape and size of the vagina within. It works on the second day!
If you want to know more information about Em, please either visit our website (www), call my mobile number (714), or email me (XXX@com).
Sincerely,
Steve Onstott
P.S. Thank you for reading my email and have a wonderful day!
Top answer
Name the state as well as the county. Add ' to' after 'introduce you'. Change 'within' to 'internally'.
- Name the state as well as the county.
- Add ' to' after 'introduce you'.
- Change 'within' to 'internally'.
- Delete the second 'information'.
- Delete the PS.
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Name the state as well as the county.
Add 'to' after 'introduce you'.
Change 'within' to 'internally'.
Delete the second 'information'.
Delete the PS.
I can't imagine why such a product is necessary.
Add 'to' after 'introduce you'.
Change 'within' to 'internally'.
Delete the second 'information'.
Delete the PS.
I can't imagine why such a product is necessary.
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thank you!0
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