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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Product explanation
Can somebody help me to judge the following product explanation?
I tried to make it a little bit sporty, now I want to know if this worked out or not since I'm not a native English speaker. Thanks for your comments!
STAR BALM is developed by – and made for athletes who want to get the max out of themselves.
The Warm Line of STAR BALM is used to warm-up your muscles. This makes our products very suitable to support your warming-up before sports and to relax your muscles as aftercare. This will help you to recover faster so next time you can exercise again without feeling tired or overloaded. STAR BALM has many different substances to let you defeat every possible situation. Please visit starbalm.com for your full exercise plan and product explanation. Sportive Regards, TEAM STARBALM.
STAR BALM is developed by – and made for athletes who want to get the max out of themselves.
The Blue line of STAR BALM is mainly used to treat injuries while sporting. The cooling effect is proven to prevent swelling. Our team made 3 different cooling products to make you defeat every possible situation. Please visit starbalm.com for your full exercise plan and product explanation. Sportive Regards, TEAM STARBALM.
I tried to make it a little bit sporty, now I want to know if this worked out or not since I'm not a native English speaker. Thanks for your comments!
STAR BALM is developed by – and made for athletes who want to get the max out of themselves.
The Warm Line of STAR BALM is used to warm-up your muscles. This makes our products very suitable to support your warming-up before sports and to relax your muscles as aftercare. This will help you to recover faster so next time you can exercise again without feeling tired or overloaded. STAR BALM has many different substances to let you defeat every possible situation. Please visit starbalm.com for your full exercise plan and product explanation. Sportive Regards, TEAM STARBALM.
STAR BALM is developed by – and made for athletes who want to get the max out of themselves.
The Blue line of STAR BALM is mainly used to treat injuries while sporting. The cooling effect is proven to prevent swelling. Our team made 3 different cooling products to make you defeat every possible situation. Please visit starbalm.com for your full exercise plan and product explanation. Sportive Regards, TEAM STARBALM.
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