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Persistence911 Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Problems with motivation letter.......Needs assitance please
I am having problems writing a motivation letter for *** course discussing the motivation for the choice of the subject in not more than 1000 characters .Here is a draft of what i was able to produce .Please do help me correct it.
Thanks in advance
Dear sir,
After studying for a B.Sc. degree in *** in *** and graduating at the top of my class . I find a need to broaden my horizon by studying *** course.
This interest was aroused after taking a course called mathematical methods and completing my B.Sc. Thesis in the area of *** which was aimed at solving different heat conduction model problems by using Alternating direction implicit (ADI) method with the aid of Matlab as a tool . I discovered while working on my project that I was limited to solving problems with a static boundary conditions due to my present knowledge.
The track suited for me is *** because studying this course will provide me a concrete foundation to a successful career in the oil and gas sector and also in the academic community of my country .The multidisciplinary nature of the course will open doors for broader application of these concepts to solve problems once I complete the studies .
I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation and academic knowledge to succeed in the program. I will be delighted if the application is decided in my favour.
Yours faithfully
***
Thanks in advance
Dear sir,
After studying for a B.Sc. degree in *** in *** and graduating at the top of my class . I find a need to broaden my horizon by studying *** course.
This interest was aroused after taking a course called mathematical methods and completing my B.Sc. Thesis in the area of *** which was aimed at solving different heat conduction model problems by using Alternating direction implicit (ADI) method with the aid of Matlab as a tool . I discovered while working on my project that I was limited to solving problems with a static boundary conditions due to my present knowledge.
The track suited for me is *** because studying this course will provide me a concrete foundation to a successful career in the oil and gas sector and also in the academic community of my country .The multidisciplinary nature of the course will open doors for broader application of these concepts to solve problems once I complete the studies .
I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation and academic knowledge to succeed in the program. I will be delighted if the application is decided in my favour.
Yours faithfully
***
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I studied for a B.Sc. degree in *** in ***, and I graduated at the top of my class. However, I wish to deepen my knowledge by studying the *** course.
I became interested in this subject after I took a course entitled "Mathematical methods" during my B.Sc. studies.
In this course, my project was in the area of ***, which was about solving different heat conduction model problems
I studied for a B.Sc. degree in *** in ***, and I graduated at the top of my class. However, I wish to deepen my knowledge by studying the *** course.
I became interested in this subject after I took a course entitled "Mathematical methods" during my B.Sc. studies.
In this course, my project was in the area of ***, which was about solving different heat conduction model problems
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