Problem in making a sentence that fit the context
I was reading an article where I saw Frank, John and Anglin three friends were released from a prison after 3 years. They were tortured brutally everyday while in prison. After reading that article I was thinking if I could also get rid of my bad luck like they were freed from that painful life! Because,I was comparing my misfortune or bad luck with a prison and I want to get rid of it. So, if I summarize the whole thing, can I say these sentences :
At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!
At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment , but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !
NB : Actually I want to make a sentence that fit the context.I would be grateful if you could correct my mistakes and also tell me the natural way of saying those sentences.
Top answer
The sentence is a question, so it needs a question mark at the end. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck" ? The grammar is ok, but I would use the present perfect in the first clause: At last Frank, John and Anglin have been released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"?
- The sentence is a question, so it needs a question mark at the end.
- At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck" ?
- The grammar is ok, but I would use the present perfect in the first clause: At last Frank, John and Anglin have been released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"?
- The second sentence needs a question mark, too.
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The sentence is a question, so it needs a question mark at the end.
At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"?The grammar is ok, but I would use the present perfect in the first clause:
At last Frank, John and Anglin
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