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SunnyShiny Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Prevention is better than cure
someone asked me to correcther writing but i am not gald with the introduction i want your suggestions too. tahnks in advance.
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we have been alwayshearing concerning a this sentence proverb over advertising boards, on the hospitals wall and so on similar places, that says "prevention is better than cure". According to this sentence specialists want to illustrate the importance of prevention and they believe that government should devote definite budget for educating and preventing health measures differnt kind of sicknesses. I personally agree with this subject.
i think she should represent the importance of prevention notjust mention that we see this inthe hospital and about specialits!!? what do you think
her writing"
we have been always
i think she should represent the importance of prevention notjust mention that we see this inthe hospital and about specialits!!? what do you think
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Hello again, Let me suggest possible corrections in terms of mechanics: Mankind has always been concerned with finding ways to cure illnesses, but, even more so, to prevent people from falling ill. It is no wonder, therefore, that in hospitals and other healthcare institutions one can often spot slogans such as 'Prevention is better than cure'. This catchphrase perfectly articulates the views of most medical professionals - they believe in the power of prevention and they want their governments to show more commitment to funding research programmes that concentrate on the prevention of various ailments.
- Hello again, Let me suggest possible corrections in terms of mechanics: Mankind has always been concerned with finding ways to cure illnesses, but, even more so, to prevent people from falling ill.
- It is no wonder, therefore, that in hospitals and other healthcare institutions one can often spot slogans such as 'Prevention is better than cure'.
- This catchphrase perfectly articulates the views of most medical professionals - they believe in the power of prevention and they want their governments to show more commitment to funding research programmes that concentrate on the prevention of various ailments.
- I follow this line of thinking, too.
- It is not very useful to try to deduce the overall meaning of the text from one paragraph only, but if you wish to avoid mentioning perhaps unimportant and little informative trivia about hospitals, etc, you could well say: It is no wonder, therefore, that the slogan 'Prevention is better than cure' has become spread and recognised worldwide...
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Hello again,
Let me suggest possible corrections in terms of mechanics:
Mankind has always been concerned with finding ways to cure illnesses, but, even more so, to prevent people from falling ill. It is no wonder, therefore, that in hospitals and other healthcare institutions one can often spot slogans such as 'Prevention is better than cure'. This catchphrase perfectly articu
Let me suggest possible corrections in terms of mechanics:
Mankind has always been concerned with finding ways to cure illnesses, but, even more so, to prevent people from falling ill. It is no wonder, therefore, that in hospitals and other healthcare institutions one can often spot slogans such as 'Prevention is better than cure'. This catchphrase perfectly articu
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Thank you, SunnyShiny.
Please note that an equivalent and perhaps more idiomatic phrase is An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.
Finally, the following is an opposite view on the issue that might be of help:
You've likely heard this before... "An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure."
Please note that an equivalent and perhaps more idiomatic phrase is An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.
Finally, the following is an opposite view on the issue that might be of help:
You've likely heard this before... "An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure."
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this aritcle has some points taht i think it is wrong too..i want to share it with you. if it is possible for you plz see it i was right on them or not.
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"To start with, the importance of being healthy, we can express that health is one of the vital factors in the human's life because to be healthy cause we can find job, do our daily works, help others and so on becase we n
she wrote
"To start with, the importance of being healthy, we can express that health is one of the vital factors in the human's life because to be healthy cause we can find job, do our daily works, help others and so on becase we n
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"To survive and have a good and healthier life we need to have enough information about individual and social health. it may cause a question in our mind how we can develope our information.Devote special programmes about prevention and disease on television, making extra time for children at shools, beside searchingin the internet, publishing magazines and books that concen to be in a safe body
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SunnyShiny,
1. You put a different spin on the ideas of the first paragraph, so I will base the corrections on your version:
For a start, the importance of prevention is to be surveyed. It goes without saying that health is central to a human's life for many reasons. Physically-fit people, for instance, have better career prospects
1. You put a different spin on the ideas of the first paragraph, so I will base the corrections on your version:
For a start, the importance of prevention is to be surveyed. It goes without saying that health is central to a human's life for many reasons. Physically-fit people, for instance, have better career prospects
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My alternative:
For a truly healthy life, we need to be properly informed about different types of infections, and the question is how to obtain basic knowledge of the subject. One possible solution might be to launch an educational series about illnesses and preventive measures in the media, in addition to broadcasting social ads with a concise and clear appeal to the audience. Another
For a truly healthy life, we need to be properly informed about different types of infections, and the question is how to obtain basic knowledge of the subject. One possible solution might be to launch an educational series about illnesses and preventive measures in the media, in addition to broadcasting social ads with a concise and clear appeal to the audience. Another
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I strongly agree with the statment " prevention is better than cure ", for instance vaccines
or all preventative medicine has proved to be mor effective way to reduce the number of fatal
diseases.
One more point, The cute can be more expensive than prevention
Time is gold , it never repeats again , if somthing bad happen , you would not be able to change it
or all preventative medicine has proved to be mor effective way to reduce the number of fatal
diseases.
One more point, The cute can be more expensive than prevention
Time is gold , it never repeats again , if somthing bad happen , you would not be able to change it
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