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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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Is this sentence correct:



"I decided to write them a complaint, and in my complaint, I presented some points, such as the ones that follow."

  

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Christine Christie I decided to write them a complaint, and in my complaint, I presented some points, such as the ones that follow. That's OK. I'd remove all but the first comma, and I'd write "those" instead of "the ones".

— CalifJim

  • Christine Christie I decided to write them a complaint, and in my complaint, I presented some points, such as the ones that follow.
  • That's OK.
  • I'd remove all but the first comma, and I'd write "those" instead of "the ones".
  • CJ
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Christine ChristieI decided to write them a complaint, and in my complaint, I presented some points, such as the ones that follow.

That's OK. I'd remove all but the first comma, and I'd write "those" instead of "the ones".

CJ

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