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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

presentation/request letter

Could you correct this presentation/request letter



"Dear Sirs,



I’m contacting you to present myself as the new sales technician for C*******, the selling partner for Portugal. Because of the specificities of this project that I’m now embracing I’d like you to contact me so that we could arrange a formation action in the C**** products, so that I’m able to solve problems and doubts presented by our customers.

I thank you for your attention to this request.



I subscribe myself with the best compliments,



Yours faithfully,

Pedro P******"



Thanks
  

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Hi, Could you correct this presentation/request letter OK, I'll try. Dear Sirs, I would like to introduce myself as the new sales technician for C*******, the selling partner for Portugal. Because of the project I am now involved with , I wouId like to meet with you to discuss a formation action in the C**** products.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could you correct this presentation/request letter OK, I'll try.
  • Dear Sirs, I would like to introduce myself as the new sales technician for C*******, the selling partner for Portugal.
  • Because of the project I am now involved with , I wouId like to meet with you to discuss a formation action in the C**** products.
  • This will enable me to provide our customers with better service.
  • Please advise me of when such a meeting would be convenient to you.
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Hi,

Could you correct this presentation/request letter

OK, I'll try.

Dear Sirs,

I would like to introduce myself as the new sales technician for C*******, the selling partner for Portugal. Because of the project I am now involved with, I wouId like to meet with y
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