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Age95 Posted 9 years ago
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Id be thanksful to everyone who proofreads this text. Comments about alternative expressions are very welcome. I made two introductions as I wasnt able to decidewhich one to pick. Please feel free to tell me which one you consider as more "professional".
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I only comment on text that is posted directly here. Can you do that, please?

  • I only comment on text that is posted directly here.
  • Can you do that, please?
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I only comment on text that is posted directly here.

Can you do that, please?
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1st introduction:test

Good morning, my name is P and this is my partner T....Good Morning...

Today we would like to spend the next ten minutes to discuss Starbucks marketing strategy in China, o
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1I haven't got time to look at it all, but i'll make a start.

The possessive of Starbucks is Starbucks's

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Thank you once again. I went through everything you did not correct yet. Here is the new version:

Now, Research tells us, that coffee consumption in China is currently growing at a rate of 30% annually. In contrast, the worldwide rate is only 2%. Because of that China has the potential to become a major coffee-consuming country and offers a huge Chance – a chance that the premier, markete

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