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AliZ965 Posted 6 years ago
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HELLO ALL I HAVE A HOMEWORK. WHAT ARE MY MISTAKES ? CAN YOU FIX ?



In My presentation today I am going to define cosmetic surgery. After then I will explain aim of cosmetic surgery
and finally I'will show statistics about cosmetic surgery.

First I want to talk about What is cosmetic surgery ? Cosmetic surgery is a unique discipline of medicine
and focused an enhancing appearance through surgical and medical techniques. It improves aesthetic appeal and symmetry
An aesthetic surgery can be performed on all areas of the head,neck and body.The goal of cosmetic surgery is;
to improve a person's self confidence, self esteem and apearance.

Now i want to talk about growth of cosmetic surgery.Doctor Jacques Joseph repaired the noses and faces whose
injured people becouse of the first and second world wars.After this event cosmetic surgery became populer.
Famous and reach people had aesthetical operations for seem more attrective.With the developing technology aesthetic
operations became more easy.Nowadays most of people want to have cosmetic surgery.

As you can see bar graph shows the total number of cosmetic surgical procedures
performed in Italy between 2011 and 2018. According to the data, the number of surgical cosmetic procedures
increased remarkably between 2015 and 2016, when the number more than doubled reaching about 325 thousand procedures.
As of 2018, the total number amounted to about 311 thousand..

At this graph In 2018, 438,448 injectable procedures and 67,536 facial rejuvenation treatments and
36,000 other procedures were performedin Italy.

So depending on two graphs the number of surgical cosmetic procedures is 540.000 and
the number of unsurgical cosmetic procesdures is 311.000
So most of people prefered unsurgical cosmetic procedures in italy in 2018.

So,in conclusion, I would say that the growth of cosmetic surgery is going to continue thanks to developed
techniques.This growth,effect people positively.Becouse cosmetic surgery improve a persons self-confidence.
Thank you all for listening

  

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What are my mistakes? Can you fix them?

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