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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Present tense

I'm just curious how to change this to present tense, can someone help me please?

Kai had a flourishing career and was getting married with his fiancée Lin. But a business crisis made him take the fall for his company. Now out of job and owing a hefty sum in compensation, Kai went out and got drunk. After a wasted Kai was picked up by an unregistered taxi driver, a series of nightmares began that not only implicated him in a homicide but also endangered Lin’s life.
  

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I assume you want to make a summary of something like a film or book. That;s the only reason I can think of for changing it into the present tense. You try first, and we'll comment on what you write.

  • I assume you want to make a summary of something like a film or book.
  • That;s the only reason I can think of for changing it into the present tense.
  • You try first, and we'll comment on what you write.
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  • ps.
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I assume you want to make a summary of something like a film or book. That;s the only reason I can think of for changing it into the present tense.

You try first, and we'll comment on what you write. Begin "Kim has ...".

ps. We get married to people.
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That would be great for me to re-write. Please take a look at my writing below:

Kai has a flourishing career and gets married to his fiancée Lin. But a business crisis makes him take the fall for his company. Now out of a job and owing a hefty sum in compensation, Kai’s frustration lead to drink. After a wasted Kai is picked up by an unregistered taxi driver, a series of nightmares began
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ORIGINAL POST:
Kai had a flourishing career and was getting married with his fiancée Lin. But a business crisis made him take the fall for his company. Now out of job and owing a hefty sum in compensation, Kai went out and got drunk. After a wasted Kai was picked up by an unregistered taxi driver, a series of nightmares began that not only implicated
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Thank you very much for your help and the changes.

It would help me very much if you could correct present tense for the below as well:

Present tense
Kai, a successful executive, gets married before he makes to take the fall for his company. Soon, his life changes dramatically when he gets tangled up with a taxi driver where a series of nightmares begins.

Past tense

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