Your sentence does read better but I wouldn't fit the music. I think that may be the reason you search for. Also I go out is present continuous and therefore shows she isn't over the raltionship.
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AnonymousSinead O'connor's famous songThe key word here is "song". Don't expect the words in songs to conform exactly to the rules of grammar. Sometimes the words have to be changed from their normal, idiomatic, grammatical forms so that they will fit the notes of the song.