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Moon7296 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

present participle sentence

Some men will enjoy having sex with prostitutors, not knowing what they do is righteous or knowing that it’s kind of bad act but do it anyway claiming that prostituting is their job or the likes.

I'm not sure if the underlined part is smooth to read. If it's not okay, can it be rephrased better?
  

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I can't see an underlined part. Change 'prostitutors' to 'prostitutes' and 'prostituting' to 'prostitution'.

— Rover_KE

  • I can't see an underlined part.
  • Change 'prostitutors' to 'prostitutes' and 'prostituting' to 'prostitution'.
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I can't see an underlined part.

Change 'prostitutors' to 'prostitutes' and 'prostituting' to 'prostitution'.
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moon7296not knowing what they do is righteous or knowing that it’s kind of bad act
I don't understand what you are trying to say here. Can you try to say it in another way?
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Gosh.. Oftentimes I forget to underline when I say there's an underlined part(actually this is because I always need to click an edit button to underline something as I can't do that initially since the system changed in 2012. I don't know how to ask a question in a window display like this; I always asks a question by clicking those categories on the top and a small box is opened up;; anyway)
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As Rover pointed out, the word is 'prostitute', not 'prostitutor'.

How about this? -

Some men enjoy *** with prostitues without thinking about whether it is right or wrong, while others do it for their own reasons, knowing it is wrong.
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