Presence

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Its so nice of you both to remember me. Even I was missing everyone so much that dont even find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. As it was really an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance class and so my presence was a must.

Please suggest.. and I request you to delete my earlier thread 'hectic'

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I'm not sure what you want. Please tell us clearly what you want us to do with your text - the title "Presence" is not very explicit.

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Synonym · Answer

"Its so nice of you both to remember me. Even I was missing everyone so much that dont even find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. As it was really an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance class and so could not make it this time."

Thanks A-stars

I just wanted to correct the above grammatically and you can also replace some of the words with some good appropriate ones

[The I want to put it as my status as all my friends had a reunion after 10years and I could not join them as I was busy at home but I was missing them as they missed me.]

Please suggest as it is a bit urgent.

Also delete my earlier thread 'hectic' and rename this one 'presence' as 'hectic'

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Synonym · Answer

"Its so nice of you both for remembering me. Even I missed u all. Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. It was really an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance class. Could not make it this time but next time for sure."

I just wanted to correct the above grammatically and you can also replace some of the words with some good appropriate ones

[The I want to put it as my status as all my friends had a reunion after 10years and I could not join them as I was busy at home but I was missing them as they missed me.]

Please suggest as it is a bit urgent.

Also delete my earlier thread 'hectic' and rename this one 'presence' as 'hectic'

Sorry for the inconvenience.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

"Its so nice of you both to remember ~~for remembering~~ me. ~~Even~~ I missed u all so terribly that I cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being there ~~a part~~. I had a ~~It was~~ really an hectic day; in the morning I had a ~~at my end Ist half being with~~ family function and in the afternoon ~~2nd half with~~ my child ~~who~~ had to perform a dance for the annual recital ~~function~~ of her dance class. I could not make it this time but next time I will attend for sure."

I just wanted to correct the above grammatically and you can also replace some of the words with some good appropriate ones
[The I want to put it as my status as all my friends had a reunion after 10years and I could not join them as I was busy at home but I was missing them as they missed me.]

Please suggest as it is a bit urgent.

Also delete my earlier thread 'hectic' and rename this one 'presence' as 'hectic'
We don't change threads once they are approved and posted unless there is a very good reason.
Sorry for the inconvenience.

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