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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

prepositions

Do i need a preposition(in) in this sentence: "Received general supervision IN analyzing systems logs in order to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities." ?
  

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Anonymous Received general supervision IN analyzing I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean. If it's for a CV, perhaps try, - Strong experience in analyzing system logs to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities.

  • Anonymous Received general supervision IN analyzing I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean.
  • If it's for a CV, perhaps try, - Strong experience in analyzing system logs to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities.
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AnonymousReceived general supervision IN analyzing
I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean. If it's for a CV, perhaps try,

- Strong experience in analyzing system logs to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities.
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I need to follow specific format for goverment application where they require experience description to start with either "general supervision" or "close supervision".
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But the statement in your original post doesn't actually start with those phrases!
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Anonymousequire experience description to start with either "general supervision" or "close supervision".
Who is the supervisor in those cases, yourself or your boss?
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Ok so which sentence is correct: "general supervision IN analyzing systems logs in order to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities." or "general supervision analyzing systems logs in order to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabilities." ?
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AnonymousOk so which sentence is correct
Neither phrase (they are not sentences) is correct given that it is you who was supervised. You need something like this:

Under general supervision, analyzed systems logs to identify potential bottlenecks and security vulnerabiliteis
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This is the requirement:


You must include the type of supervis

ion received for each and every entry for

employment/work experience. If you do not st

ate the type of supervision, the experience

cannot be accepted. When describing each

task, you must start each task statement by

using one of the following descriptions:

a.

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