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Techdaemon Posted 17 years ago
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Preposition "of" in my thesis title

My thesis panel had changed the working title of my thesis to something like "The Level of Awareness of the Registered Voters of the Three Key Cities of Albay of Broadcast Media's Role in the 2010 Poll Automation". I was the one who formulated this title based on their suggestions. But I think it is too wordy and there are a lot of "ofs". How do I reword this title without being too wordy and confusing because of the many "ofs"? I realized that the correct preposition to use after the word "awareness" is "of" which earlier I thought was "on".
  

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Multiple 'of' is not of itself reprehensible, but I agree that you have too many of them for comfort here. I suggest: The Level of Awareness in the Registered Voters of Albay's Three Key Cities of Broadcast Media's Role in the 2010 Poll Automation

— Mister Micawber

  • Multiple 'of' is not of itself reprehensible, but I agree that you have too many of them for comfort here.
  • I suggest: The Level of Awareness in the Registered Voters of Albay's Three Key Cities of Broadcast Media's Role in the 2010 Poll Automation
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Multiple 'of' is not of itself reprehensible, but I agree that you have too many of them for comfort here. I suggest:

The Level of Awareness in the Registered Voters of Albay's Three Key Cities of Broadcast Media's Role in the 2010 Poll Automation
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