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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Preposition at the biggening of sentences
Hi!
Please help my grammer.
Could a preposition be put at the biggening of sentences like this?
For the operation on the machine, a routine inventory collection (regular inventory for evry 2 hours) has been carried out before and after the problem broke out.
Please correct any mistakes above the line.
Thank you for your help.
Please help my grammer.
Could a preposition be put at the biggening of sentences like this?
For the operation on the machine, a routine inventory collection (regular inventory for evry 2 hours) has been carried out before and after the problem broke out.
Please correct any mistakes above the line.
Thank you for your help.
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The connection between "For the operation on the machine" and the rest of the sentence is unclear. There are other problems too, but I would need to understanding this aspect before making any suggestions.
- The connection between "For the operation on the machine" and the rest of the sentence is unclear.
- There are other problems too, but I would need to understanding this aspect before making any suggestions.
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The connection between "For the operation on the machine" and the rest of the sentence is unclear. There are other problems too, but I would need to understanding this aspect before making any suggestions.
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Hi!
Thank you very much for your comment.
There was a machine troube and now someone is reporting how a problem was found.
A routine inventory collection function (every 2 hours) had been operating on the mashine before and after the problem. The log before the problem indicates,,, .
Please tell me if you can understand the first sentence.
Thanks
Thank you very much for your comment.
There was a machine troube and now someone is reporting how a problem was found.
A routine inventory collection function (every 2 hours) had been operating on the mashine before and after the problem. The log before the problem indicates,,, .
Please tell me if you can understand the first sentence.
Thanks
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A routine inventory collection function (every 2 hours) had been operating [running?] on the machine before and after the problem occurred.
Is the "machine" a computer and "inventory collection function" a software program? If so, "running" may be better than "operating". I am taking it for granted that "inventory collection function" is the correct technical t
Is the "machine" a computer and "inventory collection function" a software program? If so, "running" may be better than "operating". I am taking it for granted that "inventory collection function" is the correct technical t
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Hi,
Thank you for your advice.
It is so beneficial to me.
As for the word "occurred", I was not sure if I could do without it.
I will put it at the end of the sentence.
The term "routine inventory collection" is not a specific wording. I will put them as " a function of regular inventory information collection".
I will avoid using figures when
Thank you for your advice.
It is so beneficial to me.
As for the word "occurred", I was not sure if I could do without it.
I will put it at the end of the sentence.
The term "routine inventory collection" is not a specific wording. I will put them as " a function of regular inventory information collection".
I will avoid using figures when
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AnonymousThe term "routine inventory collection" is not a specific wording. I will put them as " a function of regular inventory information collection".Although I am not familiar with the term "inventory collection", as far as I can tell, "a routine inventory collection function" works better in your sentence than "a function of regular inventory information
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