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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Prepare well in advance

Please check the following paragraph.

However, he didn't give up himself. On the contrary, he still kept going. Just like he said, "Believe in yourself when no one else does." He practices and practices every day, waiting for the opportunity to come. Often we never know when the opportunity will come, so we must already prepare well in advance.

Instead of giving up himself, he kept going. (The underlined part, which is better?)
  

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However, he didn't give up on himself ; he kept going. " He practices and practices every day, waiting fo r an opportunity to appear . Often we never know when that will happen , so we must prepare well in advance.

  • However, he didn't give up on himself ; he kept going.
  • " He practices and practices every day, waiting fo r an opportunity to appear .
  • Often we never know when that will happen , so we must prepare well in advance.
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However, he didn't give up on himself; he kept going. Just like he said, "Believe in yourself when no one else does." He practices and practices every day, waiting for an opportunity to appear. Often we never know when that will happen, so we must prepare well in advance.

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