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Pray for blessings

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When I was eleven, my parents took us to a five-day driving tour around the island. My parents planned the trip for three months, because we had to reserve rooms at some hotels and look for some scenic spots in advance. On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to take the highly risky amusement facilities. The next day, we visited some temples to pray for blessings, because my father wanted to pray to deities bring good fortunes and earn a lot of money.
  

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When I was eleven, my parents took us to a five-day driving tour around the island. My parents planned the trip for three months, because we had to reserve rooms at some hotels and look for some scenic spots in advance. On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to take the highly risky amusement facilities .

  • When I was eleven, my parents took us to a five-day driving tour around the island.
  • My parents planned the trip for three months, because we had to reserve rooms at some hotels and look for some scenic spots in advance.
  • On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to take the highly risky amusement facilities .
  • The next day, we visited some temples to pray for blessings, because my father wanted to pray to deities bring good fortunes and earn a lot of money.
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When I was eleven, my parents took us to a five-day driving tour around the island. My parents planned the trip for three months, because we had to reserve rooms at some hotels and look for some scenic spots in advance. On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to take the highly risky amusement facilities. The next d
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When I was eleven, my parents took us for a five-day driving tour around the island. My parents planned the trip for three months, because we had to reserve rooms at hotels and look for scenic spots in advance. On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to ride the thrilling, adventurous amusement facilities. The next day, we visited templ
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On the first day, we visited an amusement park, but my mother was afraid to take the thrilling rides.

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