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Stevenukd Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
PRAWNS AND LOBSTERS
Dear Teachers,
1. This area is used to raise prawns and lobsters.
2. In this village many people are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes.
3. This time you have to try your best, and don't make me lose my face, ok?
4. On the outside she pretends that she's not interested in me, but deep down inside she really loves me very much.
- Are these natural?
Thanks very much to Teachers,
Stevenukd.
1. This area is used to raise prawns and lobsters.
2. In this village many people are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes.
3. This time you have to try your best, and don't make me lose my face, ok?
4. On the outside she pretends that she's not interested in me, but deep down inside she really loves me very much.
- Are these natural?
Thanks very much to Teachers,
Stevenukd.
Top answer
Sound OK to me.
- Sound OK to me.
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rasing --> raising (also, the comma is not necessary - the same subject (the unspoken "you") is preforming both actions)
don't make me lose my face - No "my" - just "lose face"
don't make me lose my face - No "my" - just "lose face"
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1. This area is used to raise prawns and lobsters.- OK
2. In this village many people are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes. OK, but I would prefer this way:
Many people in this village are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes.
3. This time you have to try your best, and don't make me l
2. In this village many people are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes. OK, but I would prefer this way:
Many people in this village are becoming rich by rasing crayfishes.
3. This time you have to try your best, and don't make me l
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