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Is the sentence below corrected? Thank you.

A twinge of guilt surface, as she paused and stared at the young boy who clothes hung loose
and nearly swallowed him.
  

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Hi, Is the sentence below correct ed ? Thank you. A twinge of guilt surface, as she paused and stared at the young boy who clothes hung loose and nearly swallowed him.

— Clive

  • Hi, Is the sentence below correct ed ?
  • Thank you.
  • A twinge of guilt surface, as she paused and stared at the young boy who clothes hung loose and nearly swallowed him.
  • No.
  • A twinge of guilt surfaced as she paused and stared at the young boy, whose clothes hung loose and nearly swallowed him.
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Hi,

Is the sentence below corrected? Thank you.

A twinge of guilt surface, as she paused and stared at the young boy who clothes hung loose
and nearly swallowed him.
No.

A twinge of guilt surfaced as she paused and stared at the young boy, whose clothes hung loose
and nearly swallowed him.

Best wishes, Clive
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