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Welkins2139 Posted 20 years ago
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Harding told that Eddie stopped to turn off the music. If he did, he would be branded assaulted.
Eddie and other mates were gamble on cigarettes. Eddie let them win all his cigarettes. The two black boys began to turn off all the lights.
The nurse with birthmark disturbed the pills. She had been warned that Eddie was sex maniac by the nurse. She jerked her hand, and the tray fell out off the ground. Her cross between her bosoms were flying out. She said that she was Catholic. She asked him to stay away.
Eddie and other mates were gamble on cigarettes. Eddie let them win all his cigarettes. The two black boys began to turn off all the lights.
The nurse with birthmark disturbed the pills. She had been warned that Eddie was sex maniac by the nurse. She jerked her hand, and the tray fell out off the ground. Her cross between her bosoms were flying out. She said that she was Catholic. She asked him to stay away.
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Hi, Quite a lot of corrections. The first paragraph as you wrote it is hard to understand. Best wishes, Clive Harding told<<< told who?
- Hi, Quite a lot of corrections.
- The first paragraph as you wrote it is hard to understand.
- Best wishes, Clive Harding told<<< told who?
- that Eddie stopped to turn<<< I think you mean 'turning off'.
- I sthe idea that he no longer tried to turn off the music?
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Hi,
Quite a lot of corrections. The first paragraph as you wrote it is hard to understand.
Best wishes, Clive
Harding told<<< told who? Or do you mean said?that Eddie stopped to turn<<< I think you mean 'turning off'. I sthe idea that he no longer tried to turn off the music? off the music. If he did<<< If he continued tur
Quite a lot of corrections. The first paragraph as you wrote it is hard to understand.
Best wishes, Clive
Harding told<<< told who? Or do you mean said?that Eddie stopped to turn<<< I think you mean 'turning off'. I sthe idea that he no longer tried to turn off the music? off the music. If he did<<< If he continued tur
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Clive, thank you very much ! That is really good way to explain ! Once again, thank you very much !
Maricus Hancu. Thank you !
Maricus Hancu. Thank you !
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