Ppl in many countries nowadays buy cheaper products. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

This is my first time using this forum. I posted a post that hasn't approved yet but I have just remember that I did't write any of the greeting so I decide to re-post it.

Greetings! I'm from the South of Vietnam. I will have had the IELTS exam on August 17th. So I am here to send help ><. I wonder if you guys can help me do the evaluation to my IELTS writing. I would like to have my mistakes corrected by you guys so that I can write better. Thank you very much. Here is my part 2 essay.

In many nations thesedays, citizens have a tendency to purchase low-priced products than that of the expensive one. This essay will argue that the benefits of low-budget consumption offset the drawbacks entailed by this state of affairs, as the market with more reasonable-priced products may enhance the consumption of people and suit all of different finacial conditions.
One commonly cited disadvantage is that the cheaper products people consume, the lower quality they get. For instance, if people buy foods with cheaper price, especially in the sale promotion program, they may get sick by harmful bacteria that cause severe diseases as diarrhoea or dysentery, which stem from their food that they bought, and thereby threatening their health.
Despite this, there are a number of benefits to having cheap products chosen by smart choice when purchasing. First of all, cheap products may help people who are from underprivileged background having their foods and items as a bargain as they could not afford. Thus, they will be provided by many nutrition meals and have fewer worries about economizing their tight budget when purchasing.
Furthermore, owing to the increasing demands of dwellers when products are reasonably priced, the economy with be strengthened. As a result, there are no longer inventory to be thrown away and also reduce a huge amount of garbage for the community as a whole.
In short, although buying low-budget products may cause some drawbacks, it is clear that consuming low-priced products have a significant contribution to the society by boosting the economy and providing support for people who live in poverty. On balance, I would agree that purchasing cheaper products is beneficial to any nation. (286 words)