poverty

i have written a essay on poverty in Wales and maurintania and im not sure how to conclude it, ive written a basic one but not sure what else to add?
To conclude this opinion on poverty has changed massively since doing all the research and finding out all the information that I have found. I have found many different charities that I can give my support to and look into. This investigation has given me the chance to look into something I never really looked into before. Within this investigation I have gathered all the right information for my topic on poverty and how it being helped. On this first aim for public opinion I think that people aren’t doing enough and aren’t donating enough, I think that the charities are playing a big part in helping. I also think that people my age aren’t contributing enough. On my survey i showed that adult’s opinions are much more concerning than teenagers ages 17-18. On my second aim, ‘’to evaluate how poverty is being tackled in both countries’’ I decided to dig into more important research the views on the government and how they are changing it. I think that it’s too important to be pushed aside and that the government should be doing more as many people’s lives are at risk. The government need to realise how poverty is effecting these countries especially Mauritania. Mauritania is one of the world’s poorest countries and needs to be looked at and monitored as often as possible but the government aren’t doing it enough. They need funding for schools food, houses etc. For my third aim i had to analyse whether the countries would be getting better in the future, as far as it goes for Mauritania and Wales it’s not looking as good as it should be looking. It will slowly be progressing over the years but not massively. I think that over all my research did match my aims really well.