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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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Though he’s been officially enrolled at Institute of Electronics at NCTU, he’s now busy preparing for TOEFL-iBT, the minimum pass mark in the examination is 100 out of 120, which is essential to determine whether he can get the master’s degree when he finishes postgraduate courses.
  

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contiluo TOEFL-iBT, the Run-on sentence. Replace the comma with a period and capitalize T he.

  • contiluo TOEFL-iBT, the Run-on sentence.
  • Replace the comma with a period and capitalize T he.
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contiluoTOEFL-iBT, the
Run-on sentence. Replace the comma with a period and capitalize The.
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Though he’s been officially enrolled at Institute of Electronics at NCTU, he’s now busy preparing for TOEFL-iBT. The minimum pass mark in the examination is 100 out of 120, which is essential to determine whether he can get the master’s degree when he finishes postgraduate courses.

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