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Flower1234 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Post interview email - any grammar errors?
Hello
I am trying to write a nice email to the Manager to enquire about job opening in his company as I have not heard from him for over a week since the interview.
Dear Manager
As I mentioned in the interview, I am interested to join your company and I am open to accept any job opening in your company. My desire is to start work as soon as possible. Can you tell me when I can expect to know your decision. Thank you.
I am trying to write a nice email to the Manager to enquire about job opening in his company as I have not heard from him for over a week since the interview.
Dear Manager
As I mentioned in the interview, I am interested to join your company and I am open to accept any job opening in your company. My desire is to start work as soon as possible. Can you tell me when I can expect to know your decision. Thank you.
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Dear Flower 1234, Welcome to the forums. Are you absolutely certain that you wish to contact the manager and attempt to force him to respond? Did he tell you during your interview that he would definitely contact you again?
- Dear Flower 1234, Welcome to the forums.
- Are you absolutely certain that you wish to contact the manager and attempt to force him to respond?
- Did he tell you during your interview that he would definitely contact you again?
- Did he say something to the effect of "I will get in touch with you with our decision"?
- If the answer to either of these questions is "yes" then you might wish to email him.
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Dear Flower 1234,
Welcome to the forums.
Are you absolutely certain that you wish to contact the manager and attempt to force him to respond?
Did he tell you during your interview that he would definitely contact you again?
Did he say something to the effect of "I will get in touch with you with our decision"?
If the answer to either of these questions
Welcome to the forums.
Are you absolutely certain that you wish to contact the manager and attempt to force him to respond?
Did he tell you during your interview that he would definitely contact you again?
Did he say something to the effect of "I will get in touch with you with our decision"?
If the answer to either of these questions
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John
You are right. Thank you. It is not a good idea to "force" the Manager to respond. How about sending him this email asking him to consider me for future positions:
I write further to the interview last Friday. If I am not considered for any position in your company now, could you please keep my resume on your file. If any vacancies arise in the future, I would be grateful i
You are right. Thank you. It is not a good idea to "force" the Manager to respond. How about sending him this email asking him to consider me for future positions:
I write further to the interview last Friday. If I am not considered for any position in your company now, could you please keep my resume on your file. If any vacancies arise in the future, I would be grateful i
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Dear Flower,
It's nice to see such a mature reaction. You can be proud of yourself.
John
Dear XX,
Thank you again for the interveiw last Friday. I sincerely appreciated the opportunity to meet you and to discover more about *** company. If I am not a candidate for a position at this time, may I please ask that you keep my resume on file for future reference?
It's nice to see such a mature reaction. You can be proud of yourself.
John
Dear XX,
Thank you again for the interveiw last Friday. I sincerely appreciated the opportunity to meet you and to discover more about *** company. If I am not a candidate for a position at this time, may I please ask that you keep my resume on file for future reference?
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Hello John
Thank you for your help. I really appreciate it.
I have written another letter (see below) enquiring regarding temporary assignments. Could you please check for grammatical errors. Thanks again.
"I am an experienced office assistant and I am available for short-term assignments (one to two months). I can provide support to your staff and cover vacation and sic
Thank you for your help. I really appreciate it.
I have written another letter (see below) enquiring regarding temporary assignments. Could you please check for grammatical errors. Thanks again.
"I am an experienced office assistant and I am available for short-term assignments (one to two months). I can provide support to your staff and cover vacation and sic
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I am an experienced office assistant available for short-term assignments. I can provide support to your staff and cover vacations, sick and matrnity leaves. I have attached my resume detailing my background, skills and experience. If you need more information, please do not hesitate to contact me."
(one to two months) if you say that, Flower, the guy with a 10 week job will pass you by.
(one to two months) if you say that, Flower, the guy with a 10 week job will pass you by.
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Hello John
Thank you for making the changes in my letter - a good idea to put in "maternity leaves". You are right. It is up to me to decide the length of the assignment. I hope to do short term assignments while trying to find a permanent job. Thanks again. Merci
Thank you for making the changes in my letter - a good idea to put in "maternity leaves". You are right. It is up to me to decide the length of the assignment. I hope to do short term assignments while trying to find a permanent job. Thanks again. Merci
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Hello John
I have just written this letter (below) in response to a job posting which is asking candidates to respond with a cover letter stating their salary expectations. I am not exactly sure how to state my salary. Could you please review my letter. Thanks again.
"I am writing to express my interest in the office assistant posted on your website. I have attached my resume det
I have just written this letter (below) in response to a job posting which is asking candidates to respond with a cover letter stating their salary expectations. I am not exactly sure how to state my salary. Could you please review my letter. Thanks again.
"I am writing to express my interest in the office assistant posted on your website. I have attached my resume det
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Hi Flower,
I don't like it when potential employers ask candidates to post their salary requirements. Sometimes, it is a test to see if the candidate will actually give a number out publicly over the Internet via email - after all, nothing is truly private any more, is it?
My suggestion is to say something along the lines of:
"My salary expectations are those commensurat
I don't like it when potential employers ask candidates to post their salary requirements. Sometimes, it is a test to see if the candidate will actually give a number out publicly over the Internet via email - after all, nothing is truly private any more, is it?
My suggestion is to say something along the lines of:
"My salary expectations are those commensurat
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Hello John
Thank you for reviewing my letter and thanks again for your help. Wishing you all the best. *** bless you in whatever you are doing. Merci
Flower
Thank you for reviewing my letter and thanks again for your help. Wishing you all the best. *** bless you in whatever you are doing. Merci
Flower
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