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S-C-3-1-3 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Possibly Grammatically Incorrect Sentences.

Hi everyone,

In my opinion, the following sentences are written incorrectly; however, I would appreciate it if I could receive a second or third opinion.
  1. “It was an awesome workout, with a little help from my iPod.”
I believe this sentence is incorrect, and I would change it to either, “With a little help from my iPod, it was an awesome workout,” or “It was an awesome workout with a little help from my iPod.”
  1. “Maybe today, we can put the past away.”
Simply put, I do not believe that the comma is necessary in this sentence.

Any and all answers are welcome.
  

Top answer

1-- The changes you suggest are insignificant; all of the 3 are fine. 2-- The comma is grammatically unnecessary, but the writer may wish to create the pause.

— Mister Micawber

  • 1-- The changes you suggest are insignificant; all of the 3 are fine.
  • 2-- The comma is grammatically unnecessary, but the writer may wish to create the pause.
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1-- The changes you suggest are insignificant; all of the 3 are fine.

2-- The comma is grammatically unnecessary, but the writer may wish to create the pause.
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