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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Possesive right??

The local levels of law enforcement must continue to evolve to meet the demands of society's changing needs.
  

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The sentence is grammatically possible but seems overcomplicated and faintly illogical. I think "... to meet society's changing demands" suffices.

— Mr Wordy

  • The sentence is grammatically possible but seems overcomplicated and faintly illogical.
  • I think "...
  • to meet society's changing demands" suffices.
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The sentence is grammatically possible but seems overcomplicated and faintly illogical. I think "... to meet society's changing demands" suffices.
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Your use of the possessive is correct, but you need to revise as suggested by Mr Wordy.

CJ
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