Population

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0Though some people don’t like talking about the danger of population growth, the world’s population continues to grow. Most of the growth is happening in Africa and parts of South and 00. These areas are not able to feed more people. However, population growth has slowed or even stopped in Europe, North America and 00.02br02br00Today about 80 percent of the world’s population live in developing countries. The population of Asia is about twice as large as that in 1960, but 00’s population has risen by only 20 percent. The United States is the only western country whose population is expected to increase00—00not because of births, but because of immigration.02br02br00The world’s population is growing faster and faster. It has become one of the greatest problems today. Now more than six billion mouths must be fed. Misuse of the earth’s resources is a serious danger to human life. People all over the world are crying to find ways to solve the problems brought by the increasing population. 0-

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

0Grammatically you're okay.02br
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00Your lead is weak. Why would you assume people don't like to talk about it? Why would you lead with this? 02br
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00The facts about where the growth is taking place seem scattered about. Are you trying to make an implication that the growth is taking place in the areas least able to feed them? 02br
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00Also, you don't go anywhere. Is this just an introduction to a larger piece? If so, talk about how the paper will address things that can be done to help feed the world's people. If it's supposed to stand alone, what do you want people to DO with the informatino you have just given them.0-

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