0
Hạnh Nguyễn 7234 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Alternation of popular hobbies is getting quicker and quicker result in some arguments that changing popular recreations tend to reflect trends and styles rather than true personal interests. I completely agree with this assertion.


On the one hand, many hobbies are simply faddish trends. I believed these trends deprived from peer group pressure among people, especially children and teenagers. When I was 13, for instance, I want to have long bangs by the reason this style is very much in vogue at that time, many surrounded friends possessed it, but this style only existed awhile. Another typical example is the phenomenon of admiring famous singers. Some new celebrities suddenly reputed, their career path was flying high and seem to reach a peak but for over a few months or so, they were faded into oblivion.


On the other hand, some changing hobbies help people find out what makes them interesting. Over recent years, there have been several different fitness trends for adults, from jogging to aerobics to yoga. Many fitness centers appeared, they also devised big and clever marketing strategies, finally, they succeeded in holding for lots of people. For the first time, everyone did exercises for pleasure or just followed the crowd, but after a short time, they recognized that they can get many benefits and relaxation from them and they make a habit of it. After all, they did for interests not only for temporary passion. I think that is a good example of popular interests that also reveal true enjoyment.


In some periods, people make choices based on their enjoyment but I believe that changing popular interests have more trendy factor than pure excitements

  

Top answer

Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post. htm Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body.

  • Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.
  • htm Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
  • Put it with your answer in the message body.
  • Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
  • To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0

Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.
https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm


Please do not put the essay instru

0

You are trying to use high-level words to impress the examiner. But you do not know them well enough to use them naturally. It is better to write sentences with simple words than poor sentences with misused vocabulary words. You make frequent comma splice errors. Learn to avoid this common error by reading this resource:

Related Questions