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Green green 10 Posted 5 years ago
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Poor kids are able to deal with problems in their adult life than rich kids. Do you agree or disagree

In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about children's problem-solving skills. Whether children's family background affects their ability to solve problems in their later life or not . My view is both poor and rich children can clarify issue. On the one hand, a child who was born in a disadvantaged family would have had more situation to solve or make a decision on their own. For the reason that most unfortunate family, both parents need to work all day and children have to more independent to take care of themselves. Accordingly, they will have mindset and high ability to work under pressure in the future. On the other hand, wealthy kids have more financial power to experience and learn many things that poor kids cannot. As a case in point, rich children are often to sent to the best schools and get high education. That is preparing them better for solving problem in their adult life. Moreover, of course a well-off family has good relationships with people of middle or upper class. That their children have more chance to learn how to overcome the challenges soon. In conclusion, family environment alone does not much influence a child's ability to solve problems. This is the reason why both poor and rich children can solve problems by their way in future.
  

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