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English 1b3 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Poor grammar?

Also, have you checked with Trio as to when they need the ticket artwork? I assume they will need that mid next week to get them printed in time, of which I wonder if we should deliver the flyers to Trio to send out with the tickets together?

Does this sentence make sense to you?

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Yes, it makes sense to me but, unfortunately, it is abominable is its construction. It is very poorly written, but I get the gist of what the writer is trying to communicate. If you try and correct it, I'l give you a hand.

— JohnParis

  • Yes, it makes sense to me but, unfortunately, it is abominable is its construction.
  • It is very poorly written, but I get the gist of what the writer is trying to communicate.
  • If you try and correct it, I'l give you a hand.
  • Regards, JohnParis
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Yes, it makes sense to me but, unfortunately, it is abominable is its construction.

It is very poorly written, but I get the gist of what the writer is trying to communicate.

If you try and correct it, I'l give you a hand.

Regards,

JohnParis
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Also, have you checked with Trio as to when they need the ticket artwork? I assume they will need that mid next week to get them printed in time, of which I wonder if we should deliver the flyers to Trio to send out with the tickets together?

I would probably only make one change, removing of which and replacing the comma before it with a period.

Have you another suggestion? I do
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