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Rockstar25 Posted 13 years ago
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Pollution
Pollution is the contamination of natural environment or resources like air, water, etc, by adding waste material called pollutants.These have various side effect on the health of human beings from breathing problem to cancer. The smoke from the factory, vehicles discharges harmful chemical into the atmosphere, when human beings and animals inhale these toxic air, it may result in various kinds of diseases. Air pollution depletes the ozone layer, which results in global warming, due to this temperature raises, and ice caps in Arctic, Antarctic, Himalayas mountain ranges melts increasing the water level in seas and ocean, and submerging the low level areas.Water pollution causes the depletion of oxygen level in the water which affect the under water ecosystem.
so it is important to control the pollution of any kind by using natural resources as much as possible.
so it is important to control the pollution of any kind by using natural resources as much as possible.
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These have various side effect s on the health of human beings from breathing problem s to cancer. The Smoke from the factor ies and vehicles discharge s harmful chemical s into the atmosphere . W hen human beings and animals inhale these this toxic air it may result in various kinds of diseases.
- These have various side effect s on the health of human beings from breathing problem s to cancer.
- The Smoke from the factor ies and vehicles discharge s harmful chemical s into the atmosphere .
- W hen human beings and animals inhale these this toxic air it may result in various kinds of diseases.
- I corrected part of it.
- You then have a very long run-on sentence that I think you should try to rework on your own first.
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Pollution is the contamination of the natural environment or resources like air, water, etc, by adding waste material called pollutants.These have various side effects on the health of human beings from breathing problems to cancer. The Smoke from the factories and vehicles discharges harmful chemicals
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Pollution is the contamination of the natural environment or resources like air, water, etc, by adding waste material called pollutants.These have various side effects on the health of human beings from breathing problems to cancer. Smoke from factories and vehicles discharges harmful chemicals into the atmosphere, When human beings and animals inhale this toxic air, it may result in various kinds
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I still think the sentence which begins withe "Air pollution depletes.." is a very long run-on sentence. You may want to change this to be multiple shorter sentences. Either way, you need to add "the" before "Arctic" in that sentence.
You also need to remove the "s" from "discharges" after vehicles, and add an "s" to "level" in the phrase "depletion of oxygen level."
You also need to remove the "s" from "discharges" after vehicles, and add an "s" to "level" in the phrase "depletion of oxygen level."
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