Polishing poem
Anyone can help polish this poem written by a 4th grade student? Thanks.
Moonlight
By Michael Wen
The shining moon it starts at noon,
Shining bright, shining white.
The sky is blue, getting your view,
The shining moon, the shining noon.
After noon the moonlight starts,
In the sky are millions hearts.
One heart falls, another grows,
A million hearts after it rose.
The moon is the shiniest thing,
Shiner than a goose wing.
It’s very shiny, it’s very bright.
The shining moon it starts at noon.
Shining bright, shining white.
When the sky is very clear,
The shining moon is already there.
Top answer
I'm afraid that after it's polished, nobody would believe that it's written by a 4th grader anymore.
- I'm afraid that after it's polished, nobody would believe that it's written by a 4th grader anymore.
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I'm afraid that after it's polished, nobody would believe that it's written by a 4th grader anymore.
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