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Dear Ms. ***
With reference to Your advertisement in ("newspaper") dated 22.1.2004, I would like to offer my skills gained during my studies at Cracow University of Technology – Mechanic Faculty:
·Knowledge of 2D and 3D CAD programs, in combination with developed 3D imagination, allow me to easy function in virtual environment.
·Knowledge of material strength, dimension optimization and technologic process, allow me to knowingly work on design problems.
·Knowledge of electronics, hydraulic power and noise reduction
·Effective work against the clock
·Ability to work individually as well as in a team
Job in Delphi Automotive Systems would give me opportunity to develop my skills and satisfaction of work in friendly atmosphere, which I could see during my training period.
I will be grateful for a chance to present myself in person.
Thank you for Your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Y ZZZ
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You should include your resume, Kuba, and mention the fact in this letter: 'Dear Ms. ***: With reference to your advertisement in ("newspaper") dated 22 January 2004, I would like to offer my skills, gained during my studies at Cracow University of Technology – Mechanics Faculty: · Knowledge of 2D and 3D CAD programs, in combination with developed 3D imagination, allowing me to function easily in a virtual environment ·Knowledge of material strengths, dimension optimization and technologic processes, allowing me to work knowledgeably on design problems ·Knowledge of electronics, hydraulic power and noise reduction techniques ·Effective work against the clock ·Ability to work individually as well as with a team Employment with Delphi Automotive Systems would give me the opportunity to further develop my skills, as well as gain the satisfaction of working in a friendly atmosphere, as I experienced during my training period. I would be grateful for the opportunity of a personal interview.
- You should include your resume, Kuba, and mention the fact in this letter: 'Dear Ms.
- ***: With reference to your advertisement in ("newspaper") dated 22 January 2004, I would like to offer my skills, gained during my studies at Cracow University of Technology – Mechanics Faculty: · Knowledge of 2D and 3D CAD programs, in combination with developed 3D imagination, allowing me to function easily in a virtual environment ·Knowledge of material strengths, dimension optimization and technologic processes, allowing me to work knowledgeably on design problems ·Knowledge of electronics, hydraulic power and noise reduction techniques ·Effective work against the clock ·Ability to work individually as well as with a team Employment with Delphi Automotive Systems would give me the opportunity to further develop my skills, as well as gain the satisfaction of working in a friendly atmosphere, as I experienced during my training period.
- I would be grateful for the opportunity of a personal interview.
- Thank you for your time and consideration.
- Yours sincerely, Y ZZZ' Good luck in your job search.
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'Dear Ms. ***:
With reference to your advertisement in ("newspaper") dated 22 January 2004, I would like to offer my skills, gained during my studies at Cracow University of Technology – Mechanics Faculty:
· Knowledge of 2D and 3D CAD programs, in combination with developed 3D imagination,
0With reference to your advertisement in ("newspaper") dated 22 January 2004, I would like to offer my skills, gained during my studies at Cracow University of Technology – Mechanics Faculty:
· Knowledge of 2D and 3D CAD programs, in combination with developed 3D imagination, allowing me to function easily in a virtual environment
· Knowledge of material
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