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how to fix my sonnet to be iambic pentameter.

This nice boat that we just built is just fine

And never try to tell us that it’s not.

The sides, back, and front are very divine.

I guess it’s the bottom that we forgot,

So to complete this job we’ll need more tin.

Next I tack in the tin with my hammer

And paint the boat the color of my pen.

This is of course a blue Kool- Aid jammer.

I will need to gather some paint brushes

And we will need to buy some paint at Lowe’s.

Then we can put it into a contest

This is for the best designed boat ever.

Three days after our boat was entered in,

I received a call saying that we won.

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Anonymoushow to fix my sonnet to be iambic pentameter.
Can I fix the meter with dumb words?

This nice boat that we just built is just fine This nifty boat that we just built is fine.

And never try to tell us that it’s not. Good.

The sides, back, and front are very divine. The sides, the back, and front are most divine.

I guess it’s the bottom that we forgot, I guess it's just the bottom we forgot.

So to complete this job we’ll need more tin. To consumate this job, we'll need more tin.

Next I tack in the tin with my hammer not even close!

And paint the boat the color of my pen. good.

This is of course a blue Kool- Aid jammer. This is, of course, a blue and Kool-Aid jam.

I will need to gather some paint brushes I'll need to gather up some lovely paints.

And we will need to buy some paint at Lowe’s. Good.

Then we can put it into a contest Then we can find a contest and we'll win!

This is for the best designed boat ever. not even close!

Three days after our boat was entered in, Three days before our boat was entered in,

I received a call saying that we won. I got a call that told us we had won.

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