Please review my first poem, I need a honest feedback
I don’t need the tree’s solace
Because the sunlight doesn’t bite
The sky is my maroon palace
I’m not exhausted from the fight
My blood clots and mocks me
The maroon tells me I’m alive
They judge and call me flaky
But through different worlds I jive
With a little bit of darkness within
My maroon becomes my poison
No shackles and I’m not bound in
This world can’t be my illusion
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