Poetry

I know this is more than a bit simple but, in general, does it read like an ode to the woman I love as it was meant to?

Two years ago

to my world you came

Forevermore

my life did change

Before that day

true love for me

Was never felt

nor hoped to be

Forevermore

in my heart you'll be

My soul laid bare

for you to see

The way I feel

toward you is strong

In my life

you do belong

To just see you

my day tis grand

My heart you hold

within your hand

You changed the way

to act, I do

A better man

because of you

The best gift to give

from me to you

Would be to see

you as I do

If you could see

you through my eye

There is no way

you could deny

The love I feel

for you is true

I was born t’give

my love to you

Forevermore my

life did change

When

Two years ago

to my world you came