Poetry
I made a Poem
Please check it ;3
The Beauty of World
Flowers trees and grass
Can be seen by us,
can be felt by us
Adorn the view
what we see through
And it is certain
that we should be grateful for it
Mountains Valleys and Oceans
As high as heaven
As deep as eternity
Shape the world
Shape our land
And it is certain
that we should be grateful for it
Sun Moon and Stars
Cover our view,
Daze whoever sees it
As sun goes down, moon rises
Stars glitter, glide the sky
And it is certain
that we should be grateful for it
Anything I should change?
Top answer
Hi No, I think that's great Maybe you could think about capital letters. In poetry, you can use them a lot and it's ok. But you can think of: Shall I use one at the start of every line?
- Hi No, I think that's great Maybe you could think about capital letters.
- In poetry, you can use them a lot and it's ok.
- But you can think of: Shall I use one at the start of every line?
- Shall I use them for important nouns, and so on.
- If you do that regularly, it will help guide the reader through the poem But that's a small point - I liked it Dave
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No, I think that's great
Maybe you could think about capital letters. In poetry, you can use them a lot and it's ok. But you can think of: Shall I use one at the start of every line? Shall I use them for important nouns, and so on. If you do that regularly, it will help guide the reader through the poem
But that's a small point - I liked it
Dave
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