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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago

Poem titled as My heart broken into pieces.

I am not a

Ice

to melt.

I am not a

Water

to evaporate.

My heart broken

into pieces.


I am not a

Glue

to stick.

I am not a

Oil

to skid.

My heart broken

into pieces.


I am not a

God

to bless.

I am not a

Ghost

to scare.

My heart broken

into pieces.


How can I replace

my heart.

How can I replace

my feelings.

My heart broken

into pieces.

  

Top answer

There are a few non-native errors in the poem, the last of which you may want to keep or not correct (My heart is broken into pieces). That is your decision. I'm making a few adjustments for you.

  • There are a few non-native errors in the poem, the last of which you may want to keep or not correct (My heart is broken into pieces).
  • That is your decision.
  • I'm making a few adjustments for you.
  • I am not Ice to melt.
  • I am not Water to evaporate.
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There are a few non-native errors in the poem, the last of which you may want to keep or not correct (My heart is broken into pieces). That is your decision. I'm making a few adjustments for you.

I am not

Ice

to melt.

I am not

Water

to evaporate.

My heart is broken

into pieces.


I am not

Glue

to stick.

I am not

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